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Let me introduce Girl A

Abstract:
As I'm sitting in my living room trying to decide what to write my inaugural column about, I decide to take a leap. I'm hoping to write my column every week about a faceless person we all know. These columns won't be based on any one person in particular and aren't intended to hurt feelings, so take it easy....

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no

posted 10/29/09 @ 3:00 PM EST

This is just too painfully hipster and pretentious. Fail.
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uhh...

posted 10/29/09 @ 4:38 PM EST

What's the point of this?
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kent state kid

posted 10/29/09 @ 7:41 PM EST

Don't take a leap anymore. None of us get it.
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Sara

posted 10/29/09 @ 7:41 PM EST

Actually, I really liked this. I know people like this. Well written.got
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Katie

posted 10/29/09 @ 8:06 PM EST

Awesome! There's people like this everywhere.
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Wow

posted 10/30/09 @ 2:36 AM EST

Glad to know there are drunken sluts who will do blow off a toilet seat of a stranger. Fantastic. Why not stop being a whore and pick up a book and better yourself? People like that just disgust me.
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raye

posted 10/30/09 @ 1:17 PM EST

I think just think this sucks. Not that I'm a big fan of most columns that run in the stater. Whatev, I keep reading.
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Ralph

posted 10/30/09 @ 4:15 PM EST

I don't see how this has a place in a newspaper or on kentnewsnet... neither for quality or content
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This got in a newspaper?

posted 10/30/09 @ 4:57 PM EST

Seriously, I don't think I "know" a person like this. At least I don't want to know them. Must they're just be the stuff of mediocre (and pointless?) newspaper columns.
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Improve Girl_B

posted 10/30/09 @ 11:28 PM EST

Kerouacesque in the smallest degree, but he was schizo and delusional which made his works interesting. "You", repeated over and over, and over, wreaks of a passive aggressive style; try 1st person perspective. There is potential in the writing, but it reads like spaghetti: Describe everything, and hope something sticks.
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